tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post114754171905921971..comments2023-04-09T07:50:22.398-04:00Comments on 39 For the First Time: RDC: Turning the TablesVictoriaKPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-40212083629392079602011-05-07T17:43:37.891-04:002011-05-07T17:43:37.891-04:00I thought that this was great. It is so well writt...I thought that this was great. It is so well written that I thought it was true. FWIW, I know two people who went to prison after high school for white collar crimes.<br /><br />Very surreal.Jack Steinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625864271071630940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-50285303308919265442011-05-07T08:43:17.089-04:002011-05-07T08:43:17.089-04:00I love the twists and turns here! Tabled turned an...I love the twists and turns here! Tabled turned and all that! Both characters are really likable and interesting- I can't wait to learn more about them!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05381279330033574052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-57053897149234327912011-05-07T01:32:17.562-04:002011-05-07T01:32:17.562-04:00I like the twist on the prompt! I kind of felt bad...I like the twist on the prompt! I kind of felt bad for Sheila.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-38035370826047735602011-05-06T21:04:03.145-04:002011-05-06T21:04:03.145-04:00I like this! It reminds me of the saying, "Th...I like this! It reminds me of the saying, "The grass is always greener on the other side." She was jealous of what you had, and you were jealous of what she had. It turns out she had more reason to be jealous of you, but you didn't know it.The Reason You Comehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10068844198054896532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-49190567843154541882011-05-06T19:31:35.426-04:002011-05-06T19:31:35.426-04:00True or not, this is written ... FANTASTICALLY! ...True or not, this is written ... FANTASTICALLY! Good flow, word use, cadence. I'm thinking I'll be back round here ...le Chefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07901186271246515448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-83203030361513860862011-05-06T14:36:05.444-04:002011-05-06T14:36:05.444-04:00Exceptionally written. Made me wish it were a book...Exceptionally written. Made me wish it were a book so that I could read from the beginning.Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293649194823360181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-22263339520401208692011-05-06T13:49:05.390-04:002011-05-06T13:49:05.390-04:00Fabulous! Goes to show, the grass is always greene...Fabulous! Goes to show, the grass is always greener. You'd never think that a person could ever be jealous of you when they "eclipse" you (great word), but you don't know what's going on in their hearts either.<br /><br />One thing that popped out at me: If Sheila stayed in her bedroom, wouldn't she have known that Stephie was at school at the time of her crisis?<br /><br />This is such a great piece, and something anyone can relate to - being jealous of the cool girl in school!MrsJenBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10210080304270799102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-2959743948021522582011-05-06T10:11:34.677-04:002011-05-06T10:11:34.677-04:00a great bunch of emotions in such a short story.. ...a great bunch of emotions in such a short story.. great character development and very believable!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-67180098743861690242011-05-06T09:16:08.774-04:002011-05-06T09:16:08.774-04:00A great write. It broke my heart to read that last...A great write. It broke my heart to read that last line. For her to share her jealousy when it seemed she had it all, and then for you to finally have your life and ways appreciated and valued so unexpectedly.~CarolynAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739544105784203899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-48033683609834754262011-05-06T08:55:42.129-04:002011-05-06T08:55:42.129-04:00What an excellent statement about how jealousy can...What an excellent statement about how jealousy can be so misplaced, because we don't really know what is going on with people beneath the surface.<br /><br />Although I can't really imagine my parents taking in someone for a couple of weeks and letting her stay in my room and not telling me!angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.com