tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post2075358557224204725..comments2023-04-09T07:50:22.398-04:00Comments on 39 For the First Time: Waking UpVictoriaKPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-71001590345506307282012-05-29T23:07:41.798-04:002012-05-29T23:07:41.798-04:00I love how you illustrated her insecurities in the...I love how you illustrated her insecurities in the shabby but cared for surroundings. My favorite line was the one about the scarlet letter. Henry's comment is something that opens up such possibilities! Wonderful job with this prompt!dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-80767526651758968012012-05-27T14:37:22.411-04:002012-05-27T14:37:22.411-04:00Awwww....Henry won me over with his first line.Awwww....Henry won me over with his first line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-1706972373184176192012-05-27T13:17:40.534-04:002012-05-27T13:17:40.534-04:00I loved that last line. It shows so perfectly the ...I loved that last line. It shows so perfectly the self doubt, the uncertainty, and all for nothing. It's what women wish men would say. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-46124242779776143442012-05-26T14:28:10.631-04:002012-05-26T14:28:10.631-04:00Nice job. I was really empathizing with her, and t...Nice job. I was really empathizing with her, and that final line was my favorite too.Patricia JLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582005500429122486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-63419339062210171692012-05-26T10:05:27.169-04:002012-05-26T10:05:27.169-04:00Victoria, I really enjoyed the way you set this up...Victoria, I really enjoyed the way you set this up. We see all of her insecurities, emotionally, while seeing the physical details of the room as well. Then the final line from Henry? So lovely.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.com