tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post2362955042217129541..comments2023-04-09T07:50:22.398-04:00Comments on 39 For the First Time: Fiction on Friday: The Bathing SuitVictoriaKPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-59149141654699838532012-01-20T20:41:10.201-05:002012-01-20T20:41:10.201-05:00I love this!!! I felt like I was right there with ...I love this!!! I felt like I was right there with her running through the sprinklers. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-18308967310257687552012-01-20T19:53:52.962-05:002012-01-20T19:53:52.962-05:00I love this! I totally thought she had made it to ...I love this! I totally thought she had made it to the beach - the ending was completely unexpected. This character - and her mom - came to life for me. Really good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-48517235371337983522012-01-20T19:38:32.070-05:002012-01-20T19:38:32.070-05:00Oh, I love that she's in her backyard, and I c...Oh, I love that she's in her backyard, and I can hear the tang of a tough New Englander in the mother's voice.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-44947537241684896252012-01-20T17:42:37.922-05:002012-01-20T17:42:37.922-05:00LOL what a totally unexpected ending! Wonderfully ...LOL what a totally unexpected ending! Wonderfully descriptive.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-1964147200427515042012-01-20T17:34:00.407-05:002012-01-20T17:34:00.407-05:00I think a lot of us can relate to needing to escap...I think a lot of us can relate to needing to escape, even if it's just in a half-price bathing suit. It reminded me of being young, and being a little more free in what I got to spend my money on.<br />::sigh::le Chefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07901186271246515448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-34593399764879741592012-01-20T17:20:25.324-05:002012-01-20T17:20:25.324-05:00Love the run through the sprinklers. It speaks of ...Love the run through the sprinklers. It speaks of a reluctance to let go of the innocence of childhood, at least to me. You carried the character development far in just the few words, which is an accomplishment to be proud of.Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.com