tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post2774690661577972273..comments2023-04-09T07:50:22.398-04:00Comments on 39 For the First Time: 100 Word Song: GrayVictoriaKPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-42454577487427607952012-06-27T01:11:27.543-04:002012-06-27T01:11:27.543-04:00Wow! This is really good. I can feel the turmoil a...Wow! This is really good. I can feel the turmoil and disconnect she has. Painful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-23894319134259929282012-06-26T12:02:44.313-04:002012-06-26T12:02:44.313-04:00So well written, and a feeling I hope I only ever ...So well written, and a feeling I hope I only ever experience through these 100 words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-42127151802362203162012-06-25T20:07:52.466-04:002012-06-25T20:07:52.466-04:00I love what you did with this! Poor thing, this wo...I love what you did with this! Poor thing, this woman! btw, I love that song too. :)Adriennehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18065409375913634202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-11430099073897424992012-06-25T00:38:22.053-04:002012-06-25T00:38:22.053-04:00That was really good!That was really good!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09986167130467258392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-52111876256562667472012-06-24T12:47:03.655-04:002012-06-24T12:47:03.655-04:00love your take on the prompts! The colors blending...love your take on the prompts! The colors blending to grey...nicely done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-65920201026968700862012-06-23T23:17:43.443-04:002012-06-23T23:17:43.443-04:00The end of the world. It does feel like it sometim...The end of the world. It does feel like it sometimes, doesn't it.<br />Love your passive to active choice!Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-78669822402331248322012-06-23T19:23:25.514-04:002012-06-23T19:23:25.514-04:00Great, great lines here - so emotive!
"Caugh...Great, great lines here - so emotive!<br /><br />"Caught somewhere between emptiness and agony" "today they melted into gray. " - excellent!<br /><br />And really heartbreaking - it is such a common story these days, but it never fails to wrench the heart a bit!<br /><br />Love the active tense in that the "seat choose her" - A great image!<br /><br />- barbara @ de rebus<br />www(dot)barbaragildea(dot)comBarbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05481035784237871634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-58376889719599169802012-06-23T15:48:39.910-04:002012-06-23T15:48:39.910-04:00Great job using the active voice with the supervis...Great job using the active voice with the supervisor's words, but my favorite part was:<br /><br />The colors of the big city once dazzled her. Today they melted into gray. <br /><br />It shows such a sense of lost hope.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-53885176571121616302012-06-23T11:43:24.938-04:002012-06-23T11:43:24.938-04:00So immediate. I felt her desolation. And wonderful...So immediate. I felt her desolation. And wonderful apt ending.Sandra Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13191775335774130719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-47670280319861515752012-06-22T23:38:22.301-04:002012-06-22T23:38:22.301-04:00end of the line - end of the world - sometimes one...end of the line - end of the world - sometimes one and the same.<br /><br />well done.PurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-42107494541156262412012-06-22T21:56:12.669-04:002012-06-22T21:56:12.669-04:00Great job. My favorite part was the seat choosing ...Great job. My favorite part was the seat choosing her...Suzanne Earleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18385498304922239050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-33913739971387140762012-06-22T21:41:45.995-04:002012-06-22T21:41:45.995-04:00Very nicely done! I must have missed your link on ...Very nicely done! I must have missed your link on the linky thing, I came by from Write on Edge. Either way it was a pleasure to read you; I look forward to watching your words again soon.k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-334632485304709507.post-21786099054445448782012-06-22T18:39:46.663-04:002012-06-22T18:39:46.663-04:00ACK this is totally anxiety-attack producing. ACK....ACK this is totally anxiety-attack producing. ACK.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.com