Charlotte had been
observing ghosts for years—watching their memories like a silent
film. But today they spoke to her. Filled with the euphoria of
purpose and belonging, she walked the hotel grounds as the sunlight
dissolved the mist. The once manicured gardens were now a jungle of
rhodedendron and tall grasses. It would be be easy to be discouraged
by the monumental task of refurbishing the old hotel, but she
felt good about it. A bird lighted on a wild rose bush and made eye
contact with Charlotte. He tilted his head, twittered his approval,
and soared into the sky.
I'm linking up with the 100 Word Song prompt over at my friend Lance's place. Our inspiration for the week is the incomparable Nina Simone singing “Feeling Good”. If you like reading about Charlotte, check out her page here.
wow, how creative. I like the last line because of the action.
ReplyDeleteThe line about the garden was perfect. Leeroy will dig this one a lot. He may be in touch with your people soon.
I can see why you're published. This is excellent! Too good for us! I really was transported in just 100 words to that very magical place, and the bird....you fit in the bird. magical.
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