I’m linking up once again with the 100 Word Song Prompt created by Lance of My Blog Can Beat up Your Blog. This week, I managed to stick to one hundred words. Our challenge this time was to write a story inspired by Ashley Monroe’s song “Ain’t Nobody Satisfied”.
What he Needs
He opened the door slightly to make sure no one was in the hallway. At three AM the hotel was quiet. He shut the door behind him and crept away from his conquest. One night with that perfect woman was what he thought he needed. Her confidence made her sexy. Her looks made her irresistible—flawless skin, soft blond hair, perfect breasts and miles of leg. He didn’t regret betraying the mother of his children. But it left him empty. Cheating had become like popcorn. It only filled him for the moment. Maybe what he needed was still out there.
This said everything: " Cheating had become like popcorn. It only filled him for the moment." one of the greatest lines of anything you've ever written. Excellent last minute entry, vic.
ReplyDeleteThis may have one of the best lines I have ever read. "Cheating had become like popcorn." Best. Ever.
ReplyDeleteLove that line, too!
ReplyDeleteMeeee tooo! Awesome use of words!
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