Karen
heard music drifting up from the church basement. It wasn't Mrs. McCardle
practicing today. The church organist played piano accurately and deliberately.
There was no love in Mrs. McCardle's playing―music was just a job to her.
Whoever was playing the Bach prelude, was playing with passion and devotion.
The music sounded like praying.
Karen
waited in the stairwell until it was quiet. The piece was so lovely, she half expected to hear applause
when it was over. Instead, it ended in an awkward, naked silence.
She
pushed the old metal fire door open. Danny was sitting at the battered spinet.
“That
was you?”
“Is
it already 10:00?” he asked checking his watch to cover his discomfort. Karen
had offered to help set up the hall for a CYO dance.
“I'm
a little early. Sorry. I had no
idea you played.”
“My
mother made me take lessons.”
“I
don't remember that.”
Danny
blushed slightly, “I used to carry a pair of boxing gloves with me when I went.
I let the neighborhood kids believe I was training. I knew they'd give me a
hard time.”
“Did
you tell her you wanted to quit?”
“I
didn't want to quit. I just didn't want to get beat up. I loved piano. It took
me out of that neighborhood, you know?”
Karen
nodded.
“Did
you ever play professionally?”
“I
don't like to play for other people. The only person I ever played for was Mum
and she's gone.”
“When
did she die Danny?”
“While
I was away at seminary.”
“That's
when my mother died too. Do you think it's easier to lose someone when you're
religious?”
“No.
Knowing that someone has gone someplace good doesn't make them any less gone.”
He
put his hands on the keys.
“This
was her favorite,” he said as he began to play. This time, the music sounded
like a confession.
If you're interested in reading more about Karen, she has her own page on this blog. You can check it out here. The title of this story comes from an old episode of MASH. I'm
linking up this week with Write on Edge and Trifecta. Trifecta gave us the word
"deliberate" for inspiration. Write on Edge gave us the word "orphan" and this
picture:
I can just picture Danny as a kid, carrying those boxing gloves...That's a wonderful detail in this story, and your ending here-music sounding like a confession-was very beautiful! Well done!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. The music sounding like prayer and then confession - wonderful detail. Nice piece.
ReplyDeletePoor Danny ):
ReplyDeleteStephanie wrote my comment :) I like how the music took on different tones. Smart idea to carry the boxing gloves, but it's sad that it was a necessity.
ReplyDeleteThis was lovely. Fyi for future challenges, at Trifecta we ask for the word used as posted on our site without any tense changes.
ReplyDeleteGreat story - and the detail of him carrying boxing gloves to his piano lessons was absolutely perfect
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this. Music can say all sorts of things without a word, and you have conveyed that beautifully LM x
ReplyDeleteSuch brutal honesty in so few words. I think it speaks to their connection that he's honest about religion not easing the hurt of losing someone you love.
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