I'm linking up
with the 100 Word Song over at My Blog Can Beat Up Your Blog. This
week's prompt was Justin Timberlake's Mirrors. As I read over the
lyrics, I thought it would be fun to write two pieces that “mirror”
each other about how others see us—and how sometimes people get it
right and sometimes they get it wrong. Depending how you look at it,
I've either done extra credit, or I cheated by writing 200 words.
I'll leave it up to Professor Leroy to decide. This piece picks up where I last left Karen and Danny. You can read more about them here.
Karen's
Mirror
Karen and Danny
spent the afternoon decorating the church basement for the CYO dance.
They transformed the cold gray room with crepe paper and balloons
before the Ladies' Guild arrived with cookies and punch.
Mrs. Doyle looked
scandalized to see Karen with Danny. To her, Karen was the girl who
“got in trouble” after her father ran away and her mother drank
herself to death. Unfit to associate with the deacon.
To Danny, Karen was
the little girl who got straight A's and sang the “Pie Jesus” at
Mass.
They were both
right. And they were both wrong.
Danny's
Mirror
Karen could still
see the same old Danny under the cassock—the boy who had holes in
his jeans and dirt under his fingernails and got into fights. When
the Ladies' Guild arrived, they treated him with a reverence that
made him uncomfortable.
“Deacon Daniel,
you mustn't bother with moving those chairs. We'll take care of it,”
Mrs. Doyle insisted, banishing the Prodigal Son to his office to work
on his next sermon.
The coffee she
brought him tasted bitter in his mouth. Mrs. Doyle couldn't see that
he had come home to get his hands dirty, only Karen saw that.
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