Suzanne
could feel the security guard watching her toned legs as she strutted past. Two
months of sweating through Pilates and kickboxing had made her lean and
fit. She smiled at the slight ache
of emptiness in her belly. Suzanne had replaced dozens of meals with high protein
shakes. She could ignore the hunger until her afternoon snack of celery and a
hard-cooked egg.
“Suzanne,
come in here. Dana baked a cake for Rob’s birthday,” Jonathan called from the
staff lounge.
If
anyone else had invited her, Suzanne would have kept walking. But Jonathan was
the manager so she had to sing Happy Birthday along with everyone else. Suzanne
made an effort to not role her eyes at Dana playing the happy homemaker passing
out slices of cake, a dollop of chocolate ganache on her frumpy paisley blouse.
“Are
you sure you don’t want a slice Suzanne?” Dana asked.
“Oh,
no. I’m still full from breakfast,” she lied. “I really ought to get back to my
desk. Happy birthday Rob.”
The
intern smiled and waved, his mouth too stuffed with chocolate cake to speak.
“Do
you have a moment to talk?” Jonathan asked.
She
nodded and they walked to his office. He weighed his words before he spoke.
“It’s
the new client.”
“What’s
wrong? I thought they loved the campaign.”
“They
did—the artwork, the new slogan, all of it. But they’re a plus-size women’s
catalog Suzanne. They feel you can’t relate to their customers.”
“That’s
absurd. Their customers are women who love clothes. I’m a woman who loves
clothes. The only difference is a few pounds.”
“They’ve
requested Dana to be their account manager.”
“Dana?
You can’t be serious.”
“You
and she have different styles. They want Dana and that’s who they’ll get. Pass
along your files to her today.”
Suzanne
handed off six months of brilliance to Dana’s assistant, before storming into
the lounge for her snack. It had gotten pushed to the back of the refrigerator
by the remains of Rob’s birthday cake. She brushed her sleeve against the
shimmering frosting as she reached inside.
“Damn,”
she said wiping away the offending chocolate with her hand. Without thinking
she licked her fingers. She felt a rush of euphoria as the rich flavor filled
her mouth.
“Oh
my God,” she whispered, breaking off more cake. Her knees nearly buckled from
the sweet tart surprise of the raspberry filling. Suzanne’s self-control
shattered. She devoured the cake and licked the plate clean in seconds.
Mortified,
she washed the plate and laid it in the drainer just before the door opened. It
was Dana.
“Thanks
for getting those files to me. I hope there are no hard feelings.”
Suzanne
shrugged, hoping to hide her guilty secret.
“It happens. The
client is always right.”
“I
just came in to get my cake plate. It looks like someone washed it. How nice.”
“Well,
I should get going. Have a good weekend.”
“You
too. Suzanne?”
“Yes?”
“You
have a little chocolate on your forehead.”
This
week’s Write on Edge prompt was “To flip freedom upside down and write about
the forbidden or the taboo. The word limit was 450.” Speaking of taboos, I went
a little over the word limit. Although I did manage to cut over 200 words from
the first draft. This story may or may not have been influenced by the fact
that I started a diet this week.
This was so good! I really wanted to keep reading!
ReplyDeleteAh...I have felt that chocolate euphoria! It is magnificent! Now I want some cake, though...
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this one! It's divinely wicked and light-hearted and perfect! Well done!
ReplyDeleteHa! Love that last line. I feel bad for Suzanne, though. That's a lot of humbling for one day.
ReplyDeleteGreat last line. :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the piece!! The writing is so fresh and alive. My eyes stayed glued to the words the whole time. I felt so bad for Suzanne though. And the last line is definately the highlight of the whole piece. :)
ReplyDeleteThis was great! The end was the perfect touch.
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