Charlotte
pulled up in front of a 1960’s ranch that looked like all the other houses in
the neighborhood. The only difference was a lack of toys in the driveway and a
slightly overgrown lawn.
“You
must be Charlotte,” the psychic said opening the door. “I’m Georgia. Come
in.”
Georgia’s
hair was dyed an artificially vivid red and she wore a loose fitting sweatsuit
over her ample curves. She led Charlotte into the sun-filled kitchen and
gestured for her to sit.
“Can I get you
some tea?”
“No
thanks. May I record our conversation?”
“Certainly. Many of my clients record their readings. Sometimes a great deal of
information comes through.”
“I’m
not here for a reading. As I explained on the phone, I want to interview you.
I’m happy to pay your fee of course.”
“You may find I can tell you much more
interesting things about yourself than I can about me.”
“Do
your predictions just come to you? Or do you have to work at it?”
“A
little of both. When my talents first emerged, I had no control over them. Over
time I learned to direct them.”
“How
old were you?”
“Seventeen.
I was terrified about some of the things I saw and felt. I’m sure you know what
that’s like.”
“Me?”
“That’s
why your here. A journalism student would never pay for an interview. You’ve been having feelings you
can’t explain and you hope our conversation will help you figure things out.”
“So,
you’ve made in inference from my willingness to pay and come to a conclusion.
That doesn’t sound like psychic ability to me.”
“It
isn’t. The only thing I’ve proven is that I’m observant. I can demonstrate my
psychic ability if you like.”
“You
aren’t insulted?”
“Honey,
I have plenty of clients who believe. Why should I care if you do?”
Charlotte
sat quietly, not knowing what to do next.
“Give
me your hand,” Georgia said. “Maybe I can tell you something you don’t know.”
I’m linking up with the Trifecta challenge again this week. The challenge is to write a piece between 33 and 333 words long using the third definition of the word “ample”. This piece picks up with my character Charlotte as she begins her search for answers about her burgeoning psychic abilities. You can read more about Charlotte here.
AMPLE (adj.)
1: generous or
more than adequate in size, scope, or capacity (there was room for an ample
garden)
2: generously sufficient to satisfy a requirement or need (they had ample money for the trip)
2: generously sufficient to satisfy a requirement or need (they had ample money for the trip)
3: buxom,
portly (an ample figure)
excellent prose. My only nitpick is you might want to change journalism student to "journalist". when i was one I thought and called myself that. ahhh, the arrogance of youth.
ReplyDeletegood job with the word. I had to hunt for it
I want to sit down with Georgia. I'm sure there's plenty she can tell me that I don't know. Amazing job with the prompt.
ReplyDeleteI was so into this scene, I felt disappointed when it ended. I was ready for Georgia to tell Charlotte something she didn't know :)
ReplyDeleteI do love where you ended this scene - I want to know what she finds out! Great job.
ReplyDeletegreat writing!
ReplyDeleteGood dialogue.
ReplyDeleteNice dialog. I like the way the psychic turns it around on Charlotte at the end; that's where things really start to get interesting!
ReplyDeletePulled me in enough for me to be thinking more about the story than the way it was written. I have mixed emotions about psychics and spirits, and I'd love my own "OK, here you go" moment like Charlotte appears on the verge of having. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI really like this story. I found myself wrapped up in Georgia's super-confident attitude. I would like to read more. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI'm with the others, I want to know what Charlotte's looking for and what she doesn't know. Thanks for joining us this week. We hope to see you back for the new challenge.
ReplyDeleteOh, hope this continues - Very interesting. I'm noticing that high school students are really interested all of a sudden in going for readings. Wonder why?
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